Dear Ponyboy,
How is this whole experience going for you? I know you are probably going thought the worst time of your life at the moment, because I’m sure you are going nuts and you probably just want to get away from everything that is happening to you right now. Darry is probably going to be tremendously sorry once he figures out what he did was completely wrong, no one deserves to be hit for no reason. I’m sure Johnny feels even worse than you do; he’s the one who killed that soc in the first place. Bob deserved what was he was asking for, he should have been the one in the water drowning not a 14 year old boy like you. You did no harm to them, their girlfriends came on to you not the other way around, those stupid socs obviously couldn’t tell. You’re brothers will find out sooner or later, and they will come out to find you. If I were you I would just keep laying low in that old church, unless the feds figure out where you are hiding, but you should be fine out there. That old church is probably the best place for you to lay low right now, it’s in the hills all you are right now is a needle in a hay stack.
Well I just wanted to make sure you were doing alright and I just want to have a little chat with you, I hope everything goes well. Good luck to you and Johnny, stay out of trouble.
Sincerely,
Chase Seliger
Chase,
ReplyDeleteI think that you could do better in your word choice, something that might help you with that is when you are typing a piece on word. You can right click on a word and you would go under synonyms and you can find more advanced words that mean the same thing as words we typically use. But overall I think that this was a great piece I loved how it reefers back to things that actually happened in the story. Nice Gob!
I thought that it was well written but sure Bob deserved being stabbed but he was drowning Ponyboy because he was drunk and wanted to get payback. But other than that it was a good writing piece.
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